Comments on: Running: Chapter 2

By: Mike

Mike — Mon, 27 Aug 2007 22:30:30 +0000

Thanks Auntie Glad you caught that…

By: Auntie

Auntie — Mon, 27 Aug 2007 20:39:10 +0000

Come on,…nobody else caught this? “the wing whistling” I think i would have writen “the wind whistling”. I would have made more sense. But that’s just me. : )

By: Mike

Mike — Wed, 22 Aug 2007 00:44:12 +0000

Thank you Lillie! And great job on your site, I can’t wait to read more of your ideas.

By: Lillie Ammann

Lillie Ammann — Wed, 22 Aug 2007 00:24:41 +0000

Great story. Your first chapter started with a great hook, and both chapters make me want to keep reading.

By: Mike

Mike — Tue, 21 Aug 2007 03:17:54 +0000

Thanks Scott…this has been an interesting experience…it’s weird how you can write something that you aren’t sure about how to go about doing it, and yet the words can flow and be created WHILE you are writing…

Pretty amazing.

By: Scott

Scott — Tue, 21 Aug 2007 02:59:20 +0000

Interesting..keep it coming.